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名師王若平點(diǎn)評(píng)2008考研英語作文（含大作文范文）
| 2008年的考研英語作文的題目可以用“波瀾不驚”來形容，充分體現(xiàn)了命題者一貫穩(wěn)重的風(fēng)格。 圖畫作文中場景是：兩個(gè)獨(dú)腿的人在相互配合下前進(jìn)。一眼就能看出它反映的主題是社會(huì)的一個(gè)時(shí)髦話題—“合作”，或者“團(tuán)隊(duì)精神”。要說去年圖畫作文的寓意設(shè)計(jì)得有一定難度，今年內(nèi)涵是十分明確的，跑題的人應(yīng)該是寥寥無幾，完全控制在合理的范圍內(nèi)。今年圖畫作文給人的總體感覺是：主題鮮明，時(shí)代感強(qiáng)。 我記得很清楚，我在年底課堂的板書上寫過“team spirit”（團(tuán)隊(duì)精神）這個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞。《“考試蟲”八套模擬試卷》中第四（二）卷的作文題目是Cooperation. 現(xiàn)作為范文刊登出來，供大家參考： 范文： Cooperation If we want to complete our work effectively and efficiently in this busy, modern world, we must all learn to cooperate with others. As the cartoon shows, if we lose our partner, then we will fail as well. This lesson in cooperation may seem rather simple, as most people are taught that they should cooperate when they are children in school. However, many people still make the mistake by the men in the picture: they believe others must fail for their own success. Supposing that a company leader assigns two workers to do a project together, and both of them impatiently are waiting for a promotion. The two believe they must beat their “enemy” to win the promotion. To achieve this they may do things to make their partner in unfavorable position, such as interrupting their work whenever they can. In the end, without realizing it, they have ruined their own project, too. So, for our common benefit, we ought to be cooperative. Additionally, cooperation can save us a lot of time and energy if each person handles the tasks that they do best. It can be difficult to be cooperative with someone you dislike. In such a situation, just sit calmly and clear your mind for a minute. Focus on your work, instead of your partner. Perhaps in working together with him, you’ll learn that he is a really nice person. Even if this doesn’t happen, it’s still worth a try. 全篇244詞，稍加調(diào)整，就可變成今年作文，這才是真正的“原題命中”！ 今年應(yīng)用文考的是普通的道歉信，這是我在年底課堂上講的九種常見書信中的一種。課堂上講的是李明因弄丟了同學(xué)的書而道歉，考試中考的是李明回國不小心帶走了房東Bob的音樂CD而道歉，此二者在寫作方式和內(nèi)容上大同小異。無論是應(yīng)用《萬能作文》里的常用道歉信模板，還是直接套用課堂講義上的范文，都很容易寫出今年試卷中的道歉信。 現(xiàn)列舉道歉信常用套語，供同學(xué)們對(duì)照參考：（選自“考試蟲”系列《萬能作文》p56-57） 表示歉意的萬能套語： I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to… Here is my deepest apology for … I would like to express my apologies for not being able to… 提出彌補(bǔ)措施的萬能套語： I am really sorry for the trouble. Would you mind if I …? Would it be convenient for you…? 請(qǐng)求原諒的套語： Will you please accept my apology? I hope our relations can weather… 如果直接套用課堂講義上的范文，則更方便： Dear …， I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have … But I am afraid …They are connected with cherished associations which the new ones can never have. And for this … loss，I am to blame. I was so careless with my things. This is a warning to me to be more careful in the future. I'm sorry again for the inconvenience. Yours truly， Liming 這71個(gè)詞可直接套用。 總之，今年作文的主題貼近生活，寓意容易把握，寫作難度不大。如果大家方法得當(dāng)，并做了相應(yīng)準(zhǔn)備，取得好的作文成績并不難。雖然今年閱讀考的略有難度，但和作文部分綜合在一起，英語的平均分不會(huì)有太大波動(dòng)。 |